The diagram illustrates the acid rain process that has caused
pollution in the environment and in the food chain. Generally, the polluters
produce harmful gaseous gases
that rise and form polluted clouds. Eventually the clouds release acid rain and
pollute the environment.
The harmful gaseous gases are released from three
main areas which are housing, factories, and power stations and also from vehicles
used in
everywhere. The smoke produced by the polluters contains carbon dioxide, sulphur dioxide, nitrogen dioxide,
mercury and other dangerous substances. These compounds go up and collectively
form polluted clouds.
The polluted clouds then travel across the states and regions
and release its contents wherever they stop. It is concerning that they are
contained with toxic chemicals that are highly malicious to plants, animals and
humans.
As the acid rain is poured
pours on earth it poisoning poisons the plants and water reservoir
reservoirs like rivers and lakes.
Eventually, the pollutants enter the food chain and as the polluted plants and water are consumed by animals
and humans, causing they are affected with severe
health effects on them problems.
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Evaluation
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Word count
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167
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Comments
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The overview in
this report contains appropriately chosen information. The key features have
been identified and illustrated in a logical way. Paragraphing of the report
is fine. However, there are some mistakes related to grammar and sentence
structures. Overall, the report can be improved further.
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Estimated Band Score
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6.5
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Suggestions
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a little more attention to grammar and improve sentence structures.
2. Always
proofread the task response after finishing it.
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practicing to improve your performance.
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