contract employment, IELTS TASK 2, band 6.5

It is really hard to find a permanent job these days that and many have no choice but to work on a short-term contract. I believe that the disadvantages of contract employment outweigh its advantages

Although so, it cannot be denied that contract employment does have some benefits for individuals in the case. The fact that the job is expected to end after a temporary period gives the individuals some freedom in life. Some people are keen to work for a year, save some money and go travel for another the next year. Some contract jobs offer huge payouts enabling people with such passion to live as a traveler and sign the deal readily.

However, this leads to a sense of being lived “here and now’ a nomad rather than to building a stable future. Signing a contract one after another means that they always have regularly spend a lot of time to look for a new job. There is no guarantee that they will continuously have a next job find new jobs, thus for sometimes occasionally in between they are jobless and that may make one depressed and lose self-confidence. Due to feeling of insecurity about incomes, some people cannot holding get loans to owning properties like houses and cars, which are very important for their future. However, some have no choice but to get loans to own car for example, which can be very burdening once they are out of jobs.

By and large, permanent jobs help individuals to plan and build for a stable future. Contract employment on the opposite makes people have a hard time to decide for their next move, which makes it difficult to plan for better future.

	Evaluation Report
Word count	269
Comments	All the parts of the task have been covered relevantly. The ideas are presented coherently at most places. Paragraphing of the essay is fine. The range of vocabulary is sufficient. However, errors related to grammar and word choice are distracting at times. Overall, the essay meets the approval.
Estimated Band Score	6.5
Suggestions	1.      Revise grammar and improve sentence structures. 2.      Learn more vocabulary and improve choice of words. 3.      Always proofread the task response after finishing it. 4.      Keep practicing to improve your performance.