electricity generation, IELTS TASK 2, band 7.5

The pie charts illustrate the electricity production in Germany and France in 2009. Generally, both countries saw varied electricity sources in all types including in their the renewable resources.

Looking at all types of power generations, it shows that France had Nuclear as its highest proportion in electricity generation, its figure dominated the chart at 76%, leaving only 10.3% for nuclear conventional thermal   and 13.7 for renewables. Germany on the other hand, had conventional thermal as its highest electricity resource, the figure dominated about 60% of the chart. This is followed by the figure for Nuclear at 23% and renewables at 17.4%.

For France, its renewable resources were occupied by four types of production with its highest proportion was occupied by hydroelectricity at 80.59%. The figure for wind and biomass made up 20% of the chart and less than 1% on by solar and geothermal productions.

Germany, on the opposite had more even spread in its renewable energy. The figure for biomass and wind made up 40% of the chart, while 17.7% and 6.1% of the production were generated by hydroelectric and solar respectively. There was no record on of geothermal production

	Evaluation Report
Word count	186
Comments	All the requirements of the task have been covered fairly well. The key features have been identified and illustrated in a logical way. The paragraphing has been handled appropriately. Overall, the control of grammar and punctuation is good, with only a few errors made.
Estimated Band Score	7.5
Suggestions	1.      Keep practicing in the same manner. 2.      Always proofread the task response after finishing it.