Finding a new suppliers, IELTS TASK 1, band 7.5

The diagram shows a process of searching for new suppliers. Generally, the suppliers are asked for quotation of their products and the company decides based on the suppliers’ offers.

The process starts when a the managing director requires reducing cost of certain supplies. The purchasing department then makes up new detail requirements of the supplies. Then the requirement is sent to a range of potential suppliers including the previous suppliers, and they are asked for quotation of their supplies and informed that they are competing with each other for the contract.

Once the company receives the quotation from the suppliers, the purchasing department decides a shortlist of the best suppliers. The department than thencontact the shortlisted suppliers for confirmation of their offers. Then they held meetings to further discuss the agreement.

Finally, the company decides the best suppliers which who best suits their requirement. Once all the details are agreed, a new contract(s) is then signed by both parties.

	Evaluation Report
Word count	156
Comments	All the requirements of the task have been covered fairly well. The key features have been identified and illustrated in a logical way. The paragraphing has been handled appropriately. Overall, the control of grammar and punctuation is good.
Estimated Band Score	7.5
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