Human limit, IELTS TASK 2, band 6.5 or 7

The advent of science has allowed tremendous breakthroughs to be achieved which have benefited the entire human kind. Despite that, it still seems insufficient that many people are still trying to achieve other things that are beyond our comprehensive comprehension. I believe that there is always limit for everything including human capabilities and knowledge that we should not cross that of as the consequences can be unbearable.

I think, the most controversial issue that human try to grasp is cloning. It is just inhumane trying to be god by creating living beings. The first cloned sheep, Dolly for instance took years before it was succeeded achieved, and in between many defected sheep were produced and their fate is fairly unknown. Even Dolly had to suffer to some extend extent as she was infertile and lived quite a short life span. Imagine if human cloning is a success, than then many ‘humans’ would be produced with no status, no parents, and no family institution and not least how most important, what about the defected beings that would have to be ceased killed. This could be a huge disaster.

What is more, current findings have produced enormous genetic many genetically modified organisms including in our food products. Even though they claim that these products are proven beneficial as the inserted genes give better traits of the for a good harvest but still the long term effects are still unclear. Some people have claimed that consuming GM products has caused allergic reactions and some have experienced other diseases including cancer.

Based on these reasons, I believe that we should not interfere with nature as the aftermath could be catastrophe. This does not mean that we should not try to understand or develop anything new, it simply means we should not attempt to go too far.

	Evaluation Report
Word count	288
Comments	All the parts of the task have been covered relevantly. The ideas are presented coherently. Paragraphing of the essay is fine. The range of vocabulary is sufficient. However, errors related to grammar and word choice are distracting at times. Overall, the essay meets the approval.
Estimated Band Score	6.5 or 7.0
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