Thursday, 3 March 2016

iTv viewer rating, IELTS TASK 1, Band 8,Line and bar graph

The graphs illustrate the estimated audience number in millions (m) for iTV, an online TV channel by both globally and regionally. Generally, the number of audience in most of the places is expected to grow until at the end of the period.

Looking at the line graph, in 2012, globally, there were only about 132 m viewers but then the figure significantly increased until 2015 at around 142 m. Then in 2016, the audience number is predicted to slightly fall at about 140 m before it is estimated to remarkably grow and reach its highest peak at about 156 m viewers at the end of the chart.

Regionally, it is obvious that Asia and the pacific are predicted to have the highest viewing, its. THE figure will probably grow from about 61 m (2017) to around 69 m (2018) and slightly fall to nearly 68 m at the end of the predicted year. Similarly, Africa and the Middle East are also expected to have higher viewers of about 42 m to 52m.

On the contrary, Americas, Eurasia and Europe are expected to have way lower audiences of about 8m to 15 m with no significant growth over the period.



            Evaluation Report
Word count
198
Comments
All the requirements of the task have been covered fairly well. The key features have been identified and illustrated in a logical way. The paragraphing has been handled appropriately. Overall, the control of grammar and punctuation is good.
Estimated Band Score
 8.0
 Suggestions
1.      Keep up the good work!
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