alcohol intake, IELTS task 1, complex tables

The tables compare the percentage of alcohol intake of more than 20 units/ week by different genders of age 21 to 40 and by socio-economic group in the US for over 3 decades from 1979 to 2009. 

Overall, males consumed more and with higher discrepancies than that of females. All categories saw a drop in percentage in the first two decades, although some continued to fall but some seemed to recover in the final year.

For males, the highest proportion of drinkers was noted by among unskilled manual, which its figures (63-40%) were about double  of that of  the least drinkers’, which was professional (32-13%). For females, the highest figure was noted by among skilled manual (48 – 31%), though it had minor difference with other groups of about 4 to 14%. The  proportion of least drinkers among the ladies was also professional (34-10%).

Beside professionals, both genders also saw lesser figure in manager among managers (43-19 by % among men and 37-23 by % among women) and non-manual (46-24 by  % among men and 37-23 by % among women). Skilled The proportion of skilled, semi-skilled and unskilled manual noted higher records of about 58-31% among men and 48-31% among women.

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