television as an educational tool, IELTS TASK 2

Nowadays, we could can find every house with at least one television. It is believed as one of the  resources tool of knowledge but others find it solely as the entertainment medium. I strongly believe with  the right usage, television can be a powerful tool of education.

To begin with, with  the invention of satellite we can now watch various channels from all over the world. This is a good bridge of knowledge of other countries, cultures, languages and lifestyles. Simply by watching on television we can now learn everything about other parts of the world without actually do doing the reading or having an actual contact with them. Kids for example, can instantly learn new language, it  is rather impressive to see young kids impulsively learn language simply by watching televisions television.

Other point to measure consider is that, there is are a lot of educational channels provide on television. For instance, the channels that  are exclusively prepared for kids to face prepare for examination, they provide exam questions, tutorials, and a discussion on certain subjects based on school’s syllabus.  This is very informative and interactive for young kids, as reading book and other conventional learning method methods could be boring and this enlighten enlightens new way  ways of studying.

On the other hand, we could watch various informative channel  channels like documentary documentaries and cook cookery channels. For instance, the documentary channels are based on real research and studies from the experts to deliver their finding findings and interpretation on various subjects like animals, planets, science, earth and history. The cook channel cookery channels allows allow us to try different recipes and styles from all over the places.

All in all, even though television do does air explicit and prohibit contents and various mindless entertainments but it could  also be a source of knowledge and thus, it is up to us of what  to choose.

	Evaluation Report
Word count	294
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