extinction of natural resources, IELTS TASK 2

People aggressively exploit natural resources that and it is soon expected to that these valuable resources will  become insufficient to sustain of economic growth. This could be true but I believe it is not final, with efficient management and with availability of other alternatives, these natural resources could be restored made available for a long term of economic well-being.

To some extent undoubtedly, we have used our natural resources for centuries, that and now some of them are so closed very close to extinction including petroleum. This unrenewable These non-renewable resources, take at least 1000  tens of thousands of years or more to be matured  to mature and ready to be exploited, thus once they are finished, the new stock will take ages before they are ready. Though, in these days people have started looking for other alternative energies to replace fulfill this fuel function as energy booster including solar, battery and compos compost or waste energy. This These alternatives will reduce our over depends dependence on petroleum and thus sustains sustain them for a longer period, perhaps by the time of the new stocks are readied.

What is more, other natural resources being exploited are renewable including rivers which are mainly used as our water supply and also in producing hydroelectric energy. Thus, as long as the water cycle continues then probably this resources will maintain forever also be available. Though, it is also expected that rivers will soon eventually dry up due to global warming and also heavy pollution. Thus good management of ecology and earth matter can help sustain this resources resource for the future.

All in all, all our natural resources can either become extinct or destroy get destroyed, thus good management of these resources are is essential to sustain them for the sake of our future and more importantly for economic growth.

	Evaluation Report
Word count	270
Comments	All the parts of the task have been covered. An effort to elaborate the main ideas with supporting points is visible. Paragraphing of the essay is fine. However, there are many errors in grammar, spelling and word choice that make the response a bit hard to read at places. In addition, there are instances where sentences could be written in a better way. Overall, the essay needs further improvements.
Estimated Band Score	6.0
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