The graph compares the percentage difference in average residential
prices in New York, Madrid, Tokyo, Frankfurt , and London of in the years 1990-2002 compared to that of the year 1989. Overall, the house prices in 1990-1995 mostly had reduced in most of the
places from that
of 1989 prices and prices in 1996-2002 had gone up from that of the first
period.
The most striking difference was in London, of which where the former years marked a -8% decline and in later years noted
a 12% increase compared to
that of 1989. New York also remarked had the same trend, It had a fall its house price was 5% less in the first period and then
had a rise of 5% more in the second period.
On the other hand, other
cities also noted a higher prices from their first period, for instance at
first Tokyo had was 8% less in the first period and then it increased slightly but
it was still 5% less than that of 1989. The figure for decline and in later period only had -5%
decline in house price. While, Madrid increased slightly had
higher increase in later period from 2% to
4% more than that of 1989 over
the period rise.
|
|
Evaluation
Report
|
|
Word count
|
163
|
|
Comments
|
The overview in this report contains
appropriately chosen information. The key features have been identified and
illustrated in a logical way. Paragraphing of the report is fine. However,
there are some mistakes related to grammar and sentence structures. Overall,
the report can be improved further.
|
|
Estimated Band Score
|
5.5 or 6.0
|
|
Suggestions
|
1. Pay
more attention to grammar and improve sentence structures.
2. Always
proofread the task response after finishing it.
3. Keep
practicing to improve your performance.
Writing Correction Service - to order a
correction click here
|
No comments:
Post a Comment