The graph represents passenger transports in the Great
Britain for 50 year-period from 1952 to 2002. It is obviously apparent that
cars were the most popular transport of all.
Looking at the details, in the first year (1952), buses and
coaches were the most common means for traveling of about 100 billion passenger
kilometers but then. However, the figure saw a steady decrease
approaching the figure for rail until both plugged in and reached a plateau in
2002 at about 70 billion passenger kilometers. On the other hand, the figure
for rail was the lowest at about 30-40 billion kilometers for about 30
years and then it gradually increased and reached the same figure as busses and coaches.
Meanwhile, the figure for cars started only at about 70 billion
kilometers in 1952 and was the second popular mode by that time but then
saw a significant rise. The figure reached the highest of all and maintained so
since 1962 at 100 billion kilometers. The figure then had
double up doubled in every 10 years and until in 1992 the
increasing startand then the increase started
to stabilize and
reached 650 billion kilometers in 2002..
Overall, we can see that over the decades cars showed a
significant increase, while the figure for other transports were maintained under
100 billion kilometers.
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Evaluation
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Word count
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200
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Comments
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The overview
in this report contains appropriately chosen information. The key features
have been identified and illustrated in a logical way. Paragraphing of the
report is fine. However, there are some mistakes related to grammar and
sentence structures. Overall, the report can be improved further.
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Estimated Band Score
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6.0 or 6.5
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