estimated expenditure on advertisement, IELTS task 1, band 7,pie and bar charts,

The charts represents information on estimated expenditure on advertisement in 2005 and its estimated changes in the following year. As can be seen, it was expected that in 2006 the expenditure on the internet will have highest increment despite that it was expected to have lowest expenditure among all in 2005.

Looking at the pie chart, it was estimated that advertising on TV (63.3%), direct mail (57%), and newspapers (49%) will have the three highest spending. Though in the following year it was expected that TV and direct mail will only have 10% increment and newspapers will only have 8% increment.

On the other hand, it is expected that advertising on radio, magazine and the internet will only get have 21%, 13% and 8.8% of expenditure respectively. Even though the internet was expected to have the lowest spending but it was believe believed that the rate will significantly increase  by about 25%, which is about three times of others’ expected increment.

All in all, it was expected that the expenditure of on advertisement on all the media will increase  by about 5% to 10% increment except the internet which is believed to have 25% increment.

	Evaluation Report
Word count	190
Comments	All the requirements of the task have been covered fairly well. The key features have been identified and illustrated in a logical way. The paragraphing has been handled appropriately. Overall, the control of grammar and punctuation is good, with only a few errors made.
Estimated Band Score	7.0
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