The chart represents unemployment rates in three
countries for 3 year-period from 2004 to 2008. It is obviously apparent that
all of the countries had a
vast changes in unemployment rates over the
period.
Looking at the details, in 2004 country C had the least
unemployment rate, which of at only under 1% but then the rate steadily increased until 2005 and then after that the figure sharply
increased ended at to
reach almost 6% in 2008. In between 2005 and 2006, the figure plugged in with
country B (2.5%) and A (2.8%) for some time.
On the other hand, country B started the chart as the highest
figure in 2004 at almost 3%, but then saw a steady fluctuateing trend and
finally marked as the lowest figure in 2008 which was the same rate in 2004
(3%).
More to note, country C was A had the second highest figure in 2004 but which wildly fluctuated over the period but remained the
second highest figure (4.5%) at the end of the period. Though in between middle of 2004 and middle of 2005 held as the figure for country A
had the highest rate.
All in all, we can conclude that unemployment level for all
the three countries show a vary rate varied over the period.
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Evaluation
Report
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Word count
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191
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Comments
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The overview
in this report contains appropriately chosen information. The key features
have been identified and illustrated in a logical way. Paragraphing of the
report is fine. However, there are some mistakes related to grammar and
sentence structures. Overall, the report can be improved further.
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Estimated Band Score
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6.0
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Suggestions
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more attention to grammar and improve sentence structures.
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