The chart illustrates how a hybrid car works and saves how
safe it is for the environment. Generally it has two power sources, one
of which is battery which makes it more environmentally friendly. The battery
usage allows a
less dependent on petrol engine, thus legitimate a smaller petrol engine and as
a result it reduces emissions which is good for the environment.
Like any regular petrol driven car, it uses fuel in petrol
engine to ignite and produce power. The power is then sent to transmission
which drives the wheels and sets the car in motion. The only differences are that it has
battery power source and energy control unit. The car movement allows the
energy levels of the battery areto
be maintained and stored in control unit. Whenever the car needs a boast, the control unit will
pulls the power from the battery and
petrol engine and sends it to the electric motor. Then the energy is further sent to
transmission which stirrings the car to
move faster.
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Evaluation
Report
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Word count
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163
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Comments
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All the requirements of the task have
been covered fairly well. The key features have been identified and
illustrated in a logical way. The paragraphing has been handled
appropriately. Overall, the control of grammar and punctuation is good, with
only a few errors made.
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Estimated Band Score
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7.0
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Suggestions
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1. Pay
a little more attention to grammar.
2. Always
proofread the task response after finishing it.
3. Keep
practicing to improve your performance.
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