should students pay for their own higher education? IELTS TASK 1, band 6.5

In many countries today, increasing number of young people study at university.

Students, who will probably earn higher than average salaries after graduating should pay for their own higher education, rather than the state.

What are your views?

Nowadays, many young people are subjected encouraged to excel in their studies and enroll for higher education. However, some advocate that students should fund their own higher education and not the state as the benefits are for themselves alone. However, I hold contrary to do not agree with this idea.

First of all, students are not gaining much from higher education as they are claimed to. In this competitive world, thousands of graduates are still unemployed and many of them do not get job based on their qualification, some even have to work as general labors laborers. Apparently, higher salaries and great career are not always true for many of them. Consequently, these graduates are not only unemployed but hold a collective debts from their studies.

What is more, free education for all should be promoted, as if everyone has to pay for their studies, then only those affluent  would afford to do so.  Restricting  , resisting the chance for those who are bright but too poor to further their studies. Subsequently, they have no chance to change their fate as no one cares enough to support and finance their studies.

In addition, asking students to pay for their studies will put force them to work religiously to fund themselves. As a students, they Students are supposed to focus on their studies but instead they have to do both studying and working, of which this will put a higher pressure make it hard for them to balance their life which and this might affect their studies and grades.

By and large, students should be given a free education as they are not guaranteed a job upon graduation and they are still students which means have not yet earn anything not only to fund their studies but to support their own selves they do not have any income source to fund their studies and support themselves.

	Evaluation Report
Word count	297
Comments	The candidate has covered all parts of the task. S/he has presented the ideas coherently; it is evident that the writer progresses from one idea to another. Paragraphing is fine. However, there are several errors related to grammar and word choice. Overall, the essay can be improved further.
Estimated Band Score	6.5
Suggestions	1.      Pay more attention to grammar. 2.      Improve choice of words. 3.      Always proofread the task response after finishing it. 4.      Keep practicing to improve your performance.

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