international travel helps reducing misunderstanding between countries, IELTS TASK 2

Nowadays, it has become more common for people to travel around the world. Inevitably , this has decreased misunderstanding between countries. I could not agree more with this statements statement as I really believed believe that we have come to know each other better than ever.

To some extent, we are used to put a stereotype stereotypical judgements on certain countries. For instance, watching American films makes we us feel that American Americans are racism  rasist, much involved in black market and quite proud and snobbish but then if we come in contact with them personally, it  could definitely surprise us. Astonishingly,  this would change our perspective that they are actually much friendly and not much different from us as a person and more importantly no that  there is no racism.

What is more, a country that being involved in civil wars might not really affect us until we touch down the place and watch with our own eyes. That without any doubt, will really touch our hearts, puts more understand and concern makes us more understanding and concerned of what really happen happens around us.

In addition, visiting other countries will make us realized realize that something normal to us could be way abnormal to others and the reverse is also true. For instance, visiting a place that where people consumes  consume exotic meal will really open our eyes beyond our perspective and redefine what food really is. On the other hand, travelling to other part of the world makes us learn about different religions, cultures and lifestyles and thus makes us respect more of the differences.

All in all, international travel allows people from different parts of the world to meet and know each other better.

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