The pie charts compare the types of transport used by ladies to commute for work in main
cities in the US in the year 1999 and 2009. Overall, in both years the main
transport used by the ladies was metro (20-22) and the least was on foot (2-4).
Looking at the details, the figure for three types of transport that had a fall were metro, bus and
private car. The figure for metro was the highest in both years, of which only
experienced a small drop from 22 to 20. The figure for bus declined from 21 to
16, placing it at 3rd place in 2009 from 2nd rank in
1999. For private car, the figure had fallen from 18 to 15 over the period.
The modes of
transport that experienced a rise were bicycle, walking and car sharing. The
highest increase was in the figure for bicycle
from 6 to 11. The figures for walking rose from 14
to17 and car sharing from 2 to 4. Train was the only transport that had its figures remained the same which were 17 in both
years.
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Evaluation
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175
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Comments
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appropriately chosen information. The key features have been identified and
illustrated in a logical way. Paragraphing of the report is fine. However,
there are some mistakes related to grammar and sentence structures. Overall,
the report can be improved further.
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Estimated Band Score
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6.5 or 7.0
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