The diagrams represent the development stages of airplane
since the first engine flight, Wright Flyer in 1903 was introduced till the Airbus A380 made in 2004. Apparently,
over the centuries, planes were designed to carry more passengers.
The first plane, Wright Flyer had only 6 m length, of which
only one pilot can fit in it. Later on in 1935, the Doughlas DC-3 was designed which was 4 times the length of Wright Flyer made it of 20 m length. This model now had a capacity to
carry passengers of maximum 3 crews and 28 passengers.
Then in 2004, AirBus A380 was made, the length of which is
much longer of about three times that of the second one. The plane passenger capacity also
significantly increased to maximum 555 passengers.
Other point to notice is the plane speed. The first one
could only fly about 16km/h and the speed increased to 347 km/h for the second
one and ultimately to 1050 km/h in the latest version.
As can be seen, over the period planes have much revolved in
term of size, passenger capacity and speed.
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Evaluation
Report
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Word count
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179
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Comments
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The candidate has organized and
analyzed the diagrams well. The key features have been identified and
illustrated in a logical way. The paragraphing has been handled
appropriately. Overall, the control of grammar and punctuation is good, with
only a few errors made.
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Estimated Band Score
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7.5
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Suggestions
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1. Keep
practicing in the same manner.
2. Always
proofread the task response after finishing it.
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