should we marry for love or money? IELTS essay task 2

Marriage is a sacred institution that long has been practiced in any all cultures and regions worldwidely. Either  Whether ones should marry for love like the classical romancestic tale of “Romeo and Juliet” or for money which is said is way essential to keep up a good marriage is still a heated debate. This essay will present on both of these argumental views.

Living Many say that living in modern era, ones people should not use the tale of “Romeo and Juliet” as their reference. In old days, people can work on any land without any constrains . They can instantly immediately start a family with their lover even if they were penniless. OnHowever, in these days, we need money for almost everything. Ones cannot simply invade any land and claim it theirs.They need at least some cash to pay for house rent, utilities, households, childcare, child education and the list go on and on. Thus, ones  can definitely need to  marry for money to sustain their marriage life.

On the other hand, getting married solely for money might not be a good idea either. Even though, money is essential for a stable marriage life but without love the institution might also ruin. A family built without love might produce broken generations with no love and respect. The couple might be unfaithful uncaring; they can simply cheat on each other, easily get into fights and find no peace in their marriage. Marriage should make ones feel safe and secured and not feel being trapped in catastropheic environments.

At the end, we can see that both for marriage for both love or money are essential, Love guarantees peaceful marriage and money keeps a stable and organized institution. I truly believe only with these two foundations, ones can one run a happy and long lasting marriage.

	Evaluation Report
Word count	290
Comments	All the parts of the task have been covered. Paragraphing of the essay is fine. However, some ideas are not highly convincing. Even though there are some errors in grammar, word choice and sentence structures, they don’t make the meaning much harder to understand. Overall, the essay needs further improvement.
Estimated Band Score	6.0 or 6.5
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