estimated sales of jeans, IELTS Task 1, band 6.5

The bar chart compares the forecasted sales of jeans by Mango Co.  and Jack & Jones Co. in next year in Turkey. Units are measured in thousands of pairs (t.o.p).

Overall, the Jack & Jones Co. is expected to have higher sales than that of the Mango Co. over that year except in July and August. Both companies are also predicted to have an upward trends of sales starting in February next year.

Looking at the details, the Jack & Jones Co. is estimated to start the year in a boast of sales at 450 t.o.p but is likely to slump to around 200 t.op in February. However, the sales is forecasted to gradually increase but probably will remain stagnant in from June to August at 400 t.o.p. The onward sales is are expected to grow and reach its highest peak at 900 t.o.p at the end of the year.

The Mango Co. on the other hand, is predicted to start the year at a very low point at around 100 t.o.p but is likely to steadily rise before stand it levels out at 500 t.o.p in from August to November. October and It is not expected to catching up with Jack & Jones Co. with forecasted hit at only 600 t.o.p at the end of the period.

	Evaluation Report
Word count	206
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Estimated Band Score	6.5
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