internet vs printed press, IELTS TASK 2

With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Since In the last few years, the internet has been become vital for to everyone. People are becoming more engaging with this connection especially for their news sources which and this trend has slowly ceased the printed press. It is expected that soon newspaper newspapers will only last in history.

I am strongly agree with this prediction as nowadays we can see the drop in publications and sales of newspapers. This is happening because people have gradually changed accessing news online as they can now get the latest update right a second instantly after an event occurs. The existence of social media spreads the news religiously which put newspapers’ task in delivering news way behind.

What is more, people do not have to pay for their news anymore. The free access of to news online either via computers or on their phone screen make makes everything much convenient then than it was ever before.  Sliding smartphone screen is much preferable than flicking big papers that can sometime sometimes be irritating as they easily mess get messed up or lose pages despite the fact reducing paper also and electronic media also helps save more trees. In addition, more press companies have now released their press contents online. People can freely subscribe the same news published on newspapers. This is adding more reasons for eliminating the press functions.

Even though, there are tremendous reasons why many people cutting down or off their press purchased, but prefer reading news online, some still profound this old school ways like to read newspapers. They are keen on getting their news by conventionally read and flick on papers gives them a sense of satisfaction of being able to touch and hold it right in front of their eyes, leads and a sense of peace and relaxation. Some people with sight problems might also prefer to read on paper as reading on screen seems blurred and gives them headache. More importantly is their trust issue, as some only trust news reported in the press then than one released online.

At the end All in all, it is all up to people people’s preference either to enjoy reading the printed version or wildly explore them online. Though as the rate for this conventional reading has steadily decreased, it is possible that newspaper will soon expired disappear.

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