plant photosynthesis IELTS task 1

The diagrams demonstrate how plant photosynthesis process  is related to human breathing process. As can be seen, it is a mutual relationship that benefits both organisms as both produce gaseous needed by each other.

Looking at the photosynthesis process,  it is seen that the plant requires water, minerals, carbon dioxide and the sun light. This process enables plants to make its own food which is very important to grow, breed and sustain life. As a result from this process, plants emits oxygen as its waste product, which in turn is needed by humans to breathe and stay a life alive.

On the other hand, as the oxygen inhales is inhaled by humans through respiration process, carbon dioxide is emit exhaled as a waste product. In which this gaseous This carbon dioxide is needed by plants for photosynthesis process. These mutual relationship significantly benefit both side in which missing sides and absence of each other causes neither to survive.

All in all, the process demonstrates that plants need humans and the reverse is also true for humans. Thus we need to sustain plant population in order to sustain our survivability.

	Evaluation Report
Word count	173
Comments	The candidate has organized and analyzed the diagrams well. The key features have been identified and illustrated in a logical way. Paragraphing of the report is fine. However, there are some mistakes related to grammar and sentence structures. Overall, the report can be improved further.
Estimated Band Score	6.0
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